challenge

Fall of a Tyrant

Now, I'm not one to have two active challenges at a time, but Bin Laden's been dead a few days now and there seems to be no recognition from the ficly community. Your challenge is to describe the moment of absolute victory. It could be that the victory is stolen at the last moment, as with the whole 'Al Qaeda's retaliation' argument, or maybe you want to portray a situation that could have been reached years sooner if the people in charge had just paid attention to the 'His Story IV' episode of _Scrubs._ You know the government's done something wrong when the psycopathic janitor of a hospital sitcom finds the most wanted terrorist in the world before them. So, in essence, your brief is to write a story about that moment when it at least seems like you have attained absolute victory. A day for feasting and tossing aside our '37 years sober' chips. The rest is up to you. Any aspect. Dealer's choice. Write. Impress me. Don't use this many short sentences. It's stupid. Have fun. HS out.

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Challengers

6 entries
  1. Aurora lucis

    Author: K25fF

    The last thing you remember is the thing in flames, falling, dying and screaming. Being banished. It doesn’t matter any more. You open your eyes. No psychopomp…

    May 17, 2011 · Ficly archive

  2. Morning Synchrony

    Author: Robert Quick

    The product of our labors lay before us: the White House replicated in coarse sand, every exacting detail present thanks to Josh’s critical eye. Theresa and I…

    May 12, 2011 · Ficly archive

  3. The Arena

    Author: smdasilva {LoA}

    The combatants circled each other on the field of battle, the grass beneath their feet green from the spring rains. The crowd was deafening, cheering on their…

    May 5, 2011 · Ficly archive (3)

  4. Jurassic

    Author: Sir Bic

    ( “< Thrashing in the forest, You identify your prey. Peaceful and unwary, This pre-historic day. Giant trees put back, I hear an echoing roar. Rushing - you…

    May 5, 2011 · Ficly archive (2)

  5. Sudden Death

    Author: Bob Liddil

    It was war like I’d never seen war. Bodies lay in the dirt, in the ditches and weeds, groaning in pain from their wounds. There were more than two dozen…

    May 5, 2011 · Ficly archive (3)

  6. The hero.

    Author: jonjon

    “Take him down No.1, take him down,” the chiefs voice repeated into No.1’s ear piece. “Target neutralised,” he shouted back, as he gestured for the target to…

    May 4, 2011 · Ficly archive